Tuesday, September 23, 2008

two poems submitted and rejected

NOTE: These two poems were written on a cold Canberra winter day when the mecury was not into double figures. One in the morning, while talking the dog for a walk, and then in the evening, after work on the walk home from the bus stop.


AM
shhsshshhssh

ind ear
lee mumffled
mairning

missd rise sings
off the creekly
vairlley

co mingo
d air
wit frost n
mistnfog

All confusio
shamfaced

andeye aloof

tink of mema bing dead
n all


PM
And the wind full of outer space...

1 big star
1 small star

ova tree trees

n d night
is snuglyng
setlyng nwit

each home coale scing
foot fawl the skj
dankns cloud hiss

clear jetclaire

but 4 1
long livd
lentamente
spreding

con
tail

jet aeroplain

vi
si
ti
ng

vandles

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